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The Wind

Tue May 19, 2009, 6:40 PM
The wind surrounds me
Holds me
Just like your arms used to be

The wind cuts at my face tares at my eyes
Yet it loves me, wants me there, needs me there
Unlike you

The wind is cold, like blades against my skin
But I'll kiss the wind, I'll love the wind
She'll always be there, with the sweetest symphony
Harmonious and beautiful

She cooled me, cradled me when I burned
As you destroyed and crippled
She healed me when I was hurt
Trying to repair the damage you had done

I will return to the wind
For she tells no lies
Some one like you would never understand
You can't even compare to her
All you can do is make me burn and corrode
All you can do is lie.





-I wrote that back in January...I'd like some ones opinion on it. Don't think all my writing is dark and dramatic like this though. I just tend to vent in my writing and sometimes this happens.

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  • Interests: Singing, video games, track (Field Events), Basketball, and music
  • Favourite band or musician: Billy Joel, Bruce Springsteen, Disturbed, The Gaslight Anthem, Rise Against
  • Favourite genre of music: Classic Rock, Rock, punk, and Metal
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  • Personal Quote: "That which doesn't kill me, can only make me stronger."

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:iconavampireheart:
i like your poem cody! how was the interview!

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"Dear sleepless,
this is my reply.
I'll write you a lulluaby."
:iconbearaxe33:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Uhm, well the guy said that I just have to wait on a call, so I think it went well. Thanks for asking :)
:iconavampireheart:
your welcome. i heard the pops was great and that cacia's legs are smooth......

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"Dear sleepless,
this is my reply.
I'll write you a lulluaby."
:iconbearaxe33:
Yeah the pops were great! They played Star Wars and singing in the rain...*Cough*...Uh yeah Cacia's legs are smooth yeah..
:iconimogenedowne:
hey cody whats up? i like the angsty poem est tres bien! (do you take french?)
:iconbearaxe33:
Holy crap! You actually want to talk me? :P This is the first thing of heard from you in weeks! I was starting to wonder if you hated me or something. I don't take French, but I understand it well lol. I'm glad you liked it and thought it was good :D I wasn't sure myself.."est tres bien" Means it was good right?
:iconimogenedowne:
for your information i have texted you but you never texted back. to prove it i will text you right now!
:iconbearaxe33:
So, we could talk on this, your could call if you want lol.

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